Keira asked:
Ok its Greek Mythology.
There’s this girl named Dianna she’s one of Artemis’s, Goddess of the hunt, hunters (hunters can only be female and part god or goddess or nymphs) but she is also a daughter of Apollo, god of light and the sun. Well, Dianna is stuck at the age of sixteen because, when you decide to become one of Artemis’s hunters you are granted immortality. The day that Dianna would have turned 18, had she been mortal, Artemis sees that Dianna is feeling misplaced and alone with the other hunters; so Artemis send her on a journey and says that she can come back when she’s found what she’s looking for. So Dianna, confused, leaves the hunters, and gets her mortality back for the space of the time she’s away. While away she runs into her father with a boy named Marc. Marc is a half blood like Dianna but his mother is Nemesis, goddess of retribution. Dianna and the other hunters had, had a run in with Nemesis, the year before so she wasn’t on good terms with her. So Dianna is not exactly excited to see her father with one of Nemesis’s son’s. Her father see’s her unease with Marc and since Marc is one of his favorites he orders her to escort him to Olympus which is in New York. Dianna reluctantly excepts and her and Marc are on there way.
Ok so that all ive got please tell what you think good and bad comments please!!
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Go further with the journey idea. Running into her father and Marc is a letdown, not a exciting thing. One or the other, father or Marc. Try that. Have fun with it. Good stories are written at least twice. Yes, start from the beginning on a clean piece of paper and write the story again from memory. You will be surprised at how much better it is. You have good imagination. And don’t worry too much about grammar and spelling —- when you are drafting a story, those two things can be cleaned up later. Good luck storyteller !
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