http://www.escorttravestiler.org/what-do-you-think-of-my-story/ Mon, 15 Feb 2010 14:36:32 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 http://www.escorttravestiler.org/what-do-you-think-of-my-story/comment-page-1/#comment-352 QuillSB74 Sun, 14 Feb 2010 23:59:41 +0000 #comment-352 Go further with the journey idea. Running into her father and Marc is a letdown, not a exciting thing. One or the other, father or Marc. Try that. Have fun with it. Good stories are written at least twice. Yes, start from the beginning on a clean piece of paper and write the story again from memory. You will be surprised at how much better it is. You have good imagination. And don't worry too much about grammar and spelling ---- when you are drafting a story, those two things can be cleaned up later. Good luck storyteller ! Go further with the journey idea. Running into her father and Marc is a letdown, not a exciting thing. One or the other, father or Marc. Try that. Have fun with it. Good stories are written at least twice. Yes, start from the beginning on a clean piece of paper and write the story again from memory. You will be surprised at how much better it is. You have good imagination. And don’t worry too much about grammar and spelling —- when you are drafting a story, those two things can be cleaned up later. Good luck storyteller !

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